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This week, using the Center for Writing Excellence resources, provide the thesis statement and informal outline for your [second person] Personal Responsibility Essay assignment, due in Week Five.
Personal Responsibility will determine your [second person] success in life.
I. [Avoid use of the first person (I, me, my) in academic writing unless writing about a personal experience. First person use may be allowed by the instructor. ] Introduction [Writing suggestion: Avoid using "intro" or "introduction" if this is a subtitle. At the beginning of the essay, the following could be nothing else]
II. Personal responsibility directly relates to how successful you are
A. Responsible traits that show success
B. Irresponsible traits that show failure
III. Self discipline will ensure you meet short and long term [Check spelling--if used as an adjective, the preceding two words are spelled as one hyphenated word] goals
A. Self discipline definition
B. How it helps mission accomplishment
1. Short term [Check spelling--if used as an adjective, the...