Daniel Gonzalez 13/06/2015
Topic, Thesis Statement, Main ideas: Argumentative Essay 13 Minutes
Every young person should be an entrepreneur, because it gives him the opportunity to build his own future, set an example in society, and help his family since he is young.
List of main ideas:
1. Experience for the future.
2. Build your own future.
3. You can have extra money
4. You can have a good use to your extra time.
5. You can be an example for society.
6. You will have a job since young.
7. You will help your employees.
8. You can donate money.
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Many of today’s billionaires started doing businesses since they were young, and I believe that that is the key to become a successful person in life, start building your future since you are young, with hard work, perseverance, and passion in everything you do. Even God tells us to do so, when He says that we need to be an example in many ways for all the believers, and a good example for believer is that of being a laborious young person. It is not bad for a young person to work, in fact, it is good, because he adopts many good character traits.
Another great advantage of being a young entrepreneur is that you can be a role model for many other people in the entire world; you can be an example for society, and a standard for many other young people near you. Being a model is something good because as Christians, we can reach many people to Christ in a natural way, by setting the example in society and by our own testimony of how God is a great influence in our successful life. And instead of accepting young people to follow non-Christian musicians or non-Christian people, they can follow a Christian entrepreneur who honors, respects, and loves God with all his heart, and by following this entrepreneur, they will soon honor and love God.
One of the greatest benefits of being a young entrepreneur is that you can begin to have responsibilities at home, such as paying the natural gas bills, electricity bills, or contributing to the house each month or year with some amount of money. This may look weird or absurd to many other young people, but in reality, by doing this, the young person is sowing with his parents and God will give him great rewards for that. It is not bad for a young entrepreneur to pay bills; instead, it is good, because it gives the young person responsibilities to do, and makes the young entrepreneur a good family member because he contributes to home and stops spending things he used to spend because he is now the one who pays the bills.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that being a young entrepreneur is good because it gives the young entrepreneur the opportunity to build his own future, set an example in society, and help his family since he is young, what is good because by doing so, the young person gains many things, such as responsibility towards life, perseverance in his life, and of course humility to ask God for His help at what he is doing in his life. It is definitely good to be a young entrepreneur because God tells us to use well our time and give an example to the believers while we are young, and we can do that being young laborious servants of God.
Daniel Gonzalez 14/06/2015
Second Draft, Argumentative Essay 22 Minutes
“Don’t let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith and in purity.”...