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equal where ever they went and [Run-on sentence: Insert comma before "and" if the following is an independent clause (not part of a series)] they respected the United States of America because Muslims
say that the United States of America is a free Country and that Muslims are treated [Passive voice ] better in the
United States of America. [Writing suggestion: If this sentence is as long as 50 or more words, it can be confusing with logic twists, recursions, or long lists. Cut it into shorter sentences featuring one idea. Shorter sentences are easier to comprehend] [If "United States" is not used as an adjective or in an organizational name, place "the" before it] On September 11, 2001 that all [Writing suggestion: "All" or "all of" used as an intensifier very often can be removed with no loss of meaning] changed for Muslims due to [Check word usage: This phrase is most accurate in referring to something owed ($5 due) or an arrival time (due at 6:00)--try "because" or "because of"] a
horrifying incident that cause to commercial air planes to crash into the twin towers in New
York City killing people immediately and [Run-on sentence: Insert comma before "and" if the following is an independent clause (not part of a series)] [Grammar: A run-on sentence requires a comma before "and" (or other conjunction) linking main clauses] it was found that there were Muslim suicide bombers
on each flight that flew into the twin towers killing themselves as well as hundreds as well. Upon
this taking place
Muslims all over started to receive different feelings [Run-on sentence: requires a comma before "and" (or other conjunction) if linking main clauses`] and [Run-on sentence: Insert comma before "and" if the following is an independent clause (not part of a series)] they retrieved different
reactions in regards [Use "regard" ("regards" are feelings of affection)] to what took place...